Wednesday, April 18, 2007

Intermission












Ladies and gentlemen, please pay attention
There's plenty on the agenda
First action item the petition
A petition for intermission

She's gettin' all the benefits
Treatin' her like she's my rib
No cuddlin' and no first kiss
Are the current circumstances

So, I'm about to throw it in
Not my heart, the towel that is
I just don't have the time for this
Should I ask what the deal is

Nah, I think I'll trust the gut
Just stop callin' till I know what's up
No more dinner plans and stuff
I hate these mental handcuffs

She likes me, she likes me not
Shall I call, Shall I not
Am I the kinda guy she wants
No worries, as of now this stops

I think I got a strong case
I could stand being replaced
'Cause dates with friends equals a waste
Was that remark in poor taste

Either way, final decision
Possibly an impossible mission
No frontin', please don't get it twisted
Curtain down...intermission

4 comments:

jendayi said...

B. Is this from the past? Sounds like it. I like how you take experiences and come up with original ways to present them. Who would have thought you could turn this into an intermission/stage-like/playwright type of thing. Very smart.

Do you just write freely or think and strategize first?

B.m.W said...

This was all from current experience, and I usually just start to write. You know I love analogies though. It's easier to convey how you feel with references.

Glad you liked it!

jendayi said...

current experience? even more current than I'm aware of?

B.m.W said...

I think this is the same situation we talked about. Not Ally McBeal though.